tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post8013444720683283831..comments2023-05-09T05:34:47.484-04:00Comments on Paper Perfect: fourteen: ask me anythingJayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05679571835243151748noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-89902421072053515232011-04-06T14:31:43.905-04:002011-04-06T14:31:43.905-04:00Wings_of_an_Angel:
I dont have a blogspot or a goo...Wings_of_an_Angel:<br />I dont have a blogspot or a google account or an AIM account but wtvs I felt like I needed to comment on this!! I just recently started reading this story, still can't believe I found it soo late, but whatever the odds are I'm happy I've found it. I am a huge fan of you NWW story and now this... you are truly a natural born writer, this is amazing. The way you describe each scenes through the point of view of the both Max and Charlotte is simply beautiful and exactly what we need to fully understand your story.<br />Each chapter makes me want to read more and more, unfortunately I have work and school and a boyfriend to attend to, although the latter could probably survive without seeing me for a couple of days lol!! Thank god for easter week end coming soon I will be able to finish it!!<br />I will be on the look out for more of your stories, you are truly an amazing writer who knows when to not become cheesy but to put just enough emotions in a story so that we will be able to identify to it!!<br />Thank you for sharing your talent with us!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-90394161895308905982010-01-27T14:19:59.265-05:002010-01-27T14:19:59.265-05:00I love how they interact! It's so awkwardly co...I love how they interact! It's so awkwardly comfortable? <br /><br />I wonder why he felt the need to down his drink...EHisCDNhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00806482871031477305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-62656329783749288222009-09-28T00:02:05.607-04:002009-09-28T00:02:05.607-04:00I am on the edge of my seat with this story, just ...I am on the edge of my seat with this story, just as the last. I Love the dialogue between Max and Charlotte, shes kinda akward but its hard not to relate to her sometimes. And I'm slowly starting to like Max more and more!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-16547492089986858232009-09-27T23:43:50.204-04:002009-09-27T23:43:50.204-04:00I love the description of his smile that is almost...I love the description of his smile that is almost a grimace - what is he thinking?<br /><br />Great chapter, and Charlotte handles him so very, very well.Valhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18371020647083792423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-41618723635020382942009-09-27T23:22:51.871-04:002009-09-27T23:22:51.871-04:00Absolutely love the update. The witty banter betwe...Absolutely love the update. The witty banter between Max and Charlotte is just above and beyond adorable.<br /><br />And I agree with Zigh. I can't wait to see what Max has up his sleeve!PeytonRosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07021438454185430726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-88978081669344956682009-09-27T22:30:30.256-04:002009-09-27T22:30:30.256-04:00Nice update! I just smiled all the way through th...Nice update! I just smiled all the way through their dinner. It's so realistic...helenelihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05243818928883406978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-76862887014092636712009-09-27T21:37:06.013-04:002009-09-27T21:37:06.013-04:00"Besides, Max can be a pretty snazzy dresser ..."Besides, Max can be a pretty snazzy dresser when he's not in a cardigan."<br />^^ Amen sister! <br /><br />" "Cowboy?" he questions and laughs, kissing me on both cheeks.<br />I shrug. "It sounded good at the time." "<br />^^ Not sure why I felt the need to quote that, but I laughed... alot...<br /><br />" "Why in the world would you be in a dark alley in the first place?" "<br />^^ /sigh, cause he's Max Talbot! Come on Charlotte... trick question lol.<br /><br />I seriously loved all the banter of Max asking the question than answering it... too cute!<br />And oh my... "He pulls the corner of his mouth up into a smile that almost resembles a grimace as he raises his glass, quickly downing half of it." ---> I'm excited, intrigued, and oh, oh so frightened. I can't wait to see where this is going to go!! <br /><br />Great update!! YAY!Zighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04763718264884295201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-72695292850496542262009-09-27T19:44:54.964-04:002009-09-27T19:44:54.964-04:00yay! So excited to see this update. Goodness thoug...yay! So excited to see this update. Goodness though, where to start? I am embarrassed FOR charlotte for asking him if he has a girlfriend that way. hilarious but still so awkward. I guess that's why I love her character so much but I do wish that she would talk to someone about her awful ex. <br /><br />i'm rambling but anyway, hilarious chapter. <br /><br />max plus tapas = perfection.Tilliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058927413787671615noreply@blogger.com