tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post4654083470638237360..comments2023-05-09T05:34:47.484-04:00Comments on Paper Perfect: seven: mistakeJayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05679571835243151748noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-65044006834708905382009-09-21T15:29:24.652-04:002009-09-21T15:29:24.652-04:00"I'd believe in aliens and ghosts and a J..."I'd believe in aliens and ghosts and a JFK conspiracy theory."<br /><br />^^So, LMFAO I adore you! This chapter was all sorts of adorable. I really hope Charlotte goes for the run. I have a feeling she wont regret it!PeytonRosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07021438454185430726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-11270086390448188062009-09-20T23:43:09.888-04:002009-09-20T23:43:09.888-04:00Ah, leave it to Max to make his move just a little...Ah, leave it to Max to make his move just a little too soon. The boy just can't keep his hands to himself. I got all tingly thinking about his beard scraping skin though... heh.<br /><br />So I'm kind of torn if she should show up or not. I don't know, ahh.<br /><br />Wonderful as always dear.Kristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17893890271119386416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-11118820591810665122009-09-20T22:18:24.461-04:002009-09-20T22:18:24.461-04:00Ok first off...the French Toast thing was hilariou...Ok first off...the French Toast thing was hilarious... just saying.<br /><br />"With that accent, I would believe anything that came from his mouth." ---> I literally just had one of those Oprah 'ah huh' moments... and it totally dawned on me when Mr. Talbot gets all the ladies<br /><br />"I hope to God that he got it the first time, because if he has to touch me again, I think I might pee myself." HAHAHAHAHAHA<br /><br />Ok... I'm quoting it as I'm reading it... this is amazing Jay.<br /><br />"It's soft and gentle, and I'm... enjoying it, until I feel the rough scrape of his unshaven chin." ---> Chops 1, Talbo 0...<br /><br /><br />I hope so goes on that run tomorrow... and I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, that he hasn't pulled out the "I'm Max Talbot, Superstar!" act yet... can't wait for the next one... SOOO GOODZighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04763718264884295201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-81694243780210287382009-09-20T22:07:20.049-04:002009-09-20T22:07:20.049-04:00Your writing doesn't stop amazing me. We are ...Your writing doesn't stop amazing me. We are lucky to read your words night after night. <br /><br />Also,those characters are absolutely credible and they would look so good on the big screen. :) I wonder who could play Max?<br /><br />And finally, the French toast reference was so cute...<br /><br />Thanks, Jay.helenelihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05243818928883406978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-90705388550039759352009-09-20T20:55:16.238-04:002009-09-20T20:55:16.238-04:00I love her personality. Seriously. It's actual...I love her personality. Seriously. It's actually very similar to the way I act.. haha<br /><br />Oh Max.. too fast, pull it back some!! :-SJessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13150896983338108456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-47433878718630608052009-09-20T20:15:20.721-04:002009-09-20T20:15:20.721-04:00ahhhhhhhh. Omg Jay. Seriously, you make my heart m...ahhhhhhhh. Omg Jay. Seriously, you make my heart melt into a disgusting puddle with your lovely writing. <br /><br />I can't help it, I'm a puddle on the floor of the library right now. <br /><br />Amazing chapter, poor Max and Charlotte for not knowing what they are getting themsevles into right now. <br /><br /><br />The whole freckle kiss thing was toe curlingly good. :DTilliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058927413787671615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-14409884130568177442009-09-20T20:10:52.633-04:002009-09-20T20:10:52.633-04:00Ah, I hope she gives him a chance...both these cha...Ah, I hope she gives him a chance...both these characters are pretty irresistible, so it is easy to see why he might want to kiss her...<br /><br />Loved this chapter, and with each update, the story and the writing get better and better...rock on, Jay!Valhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18371020647083792423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-13142239298237492212009-09-20T20:06:57.091-04:002009-09-20T20:06:57.091-04:00GAH! Go for the run, Charlotte!
I am LOVING this ...GAH! Go for the run, Charlotte!<br /><br />I am LOVING this story Jay.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05857000021479770645noreply@blogger.com