tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post1323448775932629012..comments2023-05-09T05:34:47.484-04:00Comments on Paper Perfect: four: back in the burghJayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05679571835243151748noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-10941872036507949092009-09-18T13:23:22.909-04:002009-09-18T13:23:22.909-04:00I am caught up now, and this is an awesome story. ...I am caught up now, and this is an awesome story. I am lovin' both characters - I think they will give each other a run for the money!!!<br /><br />Love it, love it, love it. Thanks for writing another one...I can see by the comments, your fans approve :)Valhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18371020647083792423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-14020004650846203602009-09-18T08:40:51.419-04:002009-09-18T08:40:51.419-04:00"More cushin' for the pushin'" L..."More cushin' for the pushin'" LMAO. <br /><br />Such a good way to start my morning, thanks!Tilliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18058927413787671615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-86316159923230322052009-09-17T23:39:46.710-04:002009-09-17T23:39:46.710-04:00Haha poor Max. Shot down!
Excellent Jay. Keep it...Haha poor Max. Shot down! <br /><br />Excellent Jay. Keep it up.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05857000021479770645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-85061562052615990282009-09-17T23:26:45.323-04:002009-09-17T23:26:45.323-04:00I like how this story is starting. I can't wai...I like how this story is starting. I can't wait to read more.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-90375647429530514752009-09-17T22:22:09.558-04:002009-09-17T22:22:09.558-04:00Ahh, I totally feel the need to quote this again, ...Ahh, I totally feel the need to quote this again, because it's so darn quote-able!<br /><br />"Um, excuse me? Sandra Bullock," Tanger says. He's got some weird obsession with her.<br /><br />^^I can just totally imagine that happening! You write so spectacularly, Jay. This Max point of view is totally making me love him, too!PeytonRosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07021438454185430726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-88622118901626798632009-09-17T21:57:54.871-04:002009-09-17T21:57:54.871-04:00Oh I LOVE Max's POV. He's just... (sigh) h...Oh I LOVE Max's POV. He's just... (sigh) he's Max. That's what he is. haha. I'm falling in love with your Max, that's whats happening right now. I can feel it.Kristinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17893890271119386416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7330377107172856718.post-47085282654023637142009-09-17T20:34:43.001-04:002009-09-17T20:34:43.001-04:00Alright so... once again:
"I mean, you could...Alright so... once again:<br /><br />"I mean, you could put a fire hydrant as winger on a line with Geno, and it's bound to score a couple goals..."<br />LMFAO... genius!! <br /><br />Seriously love your Max... just the right amount of attitude, ego, party-boy and conscious. I'm really looking forward to more... you're making me love Talbo as much as Charlotte! =)Zighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04763718264884295201noreply@blogger.com